Epiphany from a Camel’s Point of View

Sassetta, Journey of the Magi

Sassetta, Journey of the Magi (c. 1425)

Spiritual Sunday

Although Epiphany is January 6, today is Epiphany Sunday.  Epiphany is when Christians celebrate the entry into the world of the radical new idea that love is more powerful than death.  To call the idea counterintuitive is a spectacular understatement.  Our impulse to yield to fear is so overwhelming that we need constant prayer and worship to rekindle our faith.  The notion that love can trump death didn’t originate with Jesus, but he embodied it so powerfully that it caught on.

Melchior, Caspar and Balthasar, the three wise men, stand in for the greater world.   They also represent mystical wisdom.  Perhaps we could say that the shepherds who came to see the infant Jesus have the simple faith of the heart whereas the magi have the higher wisdom of the head. Neither is complete without the other.

Last year I wrote about T. S. Eliot’s “Journey of the Magi,” where one of the kings recalls the moment, years ago, when he saw the Christ child.  He remembers that the journey to Bethlehem was hard but worth the suffering.  Since that time the vision has clouded over, and he is “no longer at ease here, in the old dispensation,/With an alien people clutching their gods.”

Today’s poem, considerably lighter, takes the vantage point of one of the camels.  Rather than lamenting the loss of belief (a nonstop Eliot theme that eventually becomes tiresome), the poem tells us to be good community citizens.  Regardless of where we live and what we do, we can live in love and service.  That, the camel tells us, is how Christ’s love manifests itself in the world.

There is an implied criticism in the poem of the kings for not having stuck it out with the Christ child–that’s why the camel has to slip away–so perhaps the poem does echo Eliot’s.  We once were in touch with divinity before returning to our normal lives.  

Then again, as I said, we all of us lose the vision and must rediscover it.  Again and again.

You’ll probably recognize the Biblical allusion in the final stanza but, in case you don’t, it’s Jesus’ assertion (Matthew 19:24) that “it is easier for a camel to pass through the eye of a needle than for a rich man to enter the kingdom of Heaven.” “Effendi” is Arabic for “Master.”

Here’s the poem:

Fable of the Third Christmas Camel

By Scott Bates

(Editor’s note: The following poetic fragment, evidently an over0looked scrap of the Dead Sea Scrolls, was recently discovered near Jerusalem, stuck to the bottom of an empty bagel can. We offer here an approimate translation into modern English of this invaluable historical document.)

I went all the way
But on the return trip
I gave the caravan
The slip

One desert night
Quit Balthazar
With all his frankincense
And myrrh

And headed out
Across the sand
It was dawn when I came
To this strange land

And found this family
Living here
Without a camel
Because they were poor

So I stayed with them
Carried their hides
Gave all the kids
Free camel rides

Sat with the baby
Worked with the man
Sang them ballads
Of Ispahan

Carried the water
Pulled the plow
Loved my neighbor
Who was a cow

I like it here
I’m staying with them
As I wanted to stay
In Bethlehem

With that other
Family I knew
Which proves Effendi
That passing through

The eye of a needle
Is an easier thing
For a camel
Than a king

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  1. Barbara
    Posted January 2, 2011 at 10:17 am | Permalink

    Robin, Thank you for sharing this! I think it’s my new favorite Christmas poem.

  2. Posted January 3, 2011 at 6:28 pm | Permalink

    My favorite, too, Robin. Thanks for sharing. I haven’t commented on your posts lately because I thought you were away for the Holidays. I think this would make a nice childrens’ Christmas book with just a few minor changes.

  3. Robin Bates
    Posted January 4, 2011 at 7:15 am | Permalink

    I made it back last night, Yvette. You’re right about the children’s book. Your idea makes me think of the illustration that a friend of our family’s did for the poem (my father self-published the collection in which it appears), of a young Arab joyously sliding off the camel’s back. I’ll see if I can get a copy of the picture and scan it in.

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